Some say that sports play an important role in society. Others, however, think that it is nothing more than a leisure activity. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
World Cup, the most explosive football festive, undeniably cheers up the a large number of supporters all over the world every four year. Sports have been proved to entertain people in many ways, however, some people claim that a little contribution to social development is subject to the athletic activities. From my perspectives, I do believe that both social and recreational benefits are attributed to sports.
On the one hand, not only physical training but also mental development do the sports offer players. Long-lasting working hours bring people about much aggressiveness and tiredness, which requires them to resort entertainment activities so as to wind down. For instance, after various nights of burning the midnight oil for exams, male students usually excitedly take part in football matches, which either temporarily get them away from educational pressures or enhance their fitnesses. Furthermore, not only by directly participating the sports, does enjoying them through screens also induce tremendous red-letter moments between individuals. The widespread coverage of television enables most people to watch live games and share their emotions stream to others, from which mutual sharing and interaction among people are reinforced.
More importantly, social awareness of athletic merits together with community bondings are indisputable advantages of sports. Those who are greatly involved in sport activities are proved to be healthier, which is a driving factor for their relatives and friends to take up the sports as well. Besides, sports also work wonders for social gathering regardless of the teams spectators support for. Only by shouting and cheering for their favorite teams, have spectators recorded their emotionally positive behaviors. For instance, Vietnamese football spectators made deep impressions on global press on the back of cordially vibrant cheering for U23 team's victories on 2018.
In conclusion, sports provide not only relaxation for individuals but also educationally propagandist benefits. I do reckon that a healthy individual who participate in regular exercises is a useful citizen for healthily social development.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 149, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...orld participate in sporting activities everyday simply because of the sense of well-bei...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1466.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05517241379 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55287951476 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.562068965517 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.1252475499 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.769230769 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3076923077 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.84615384615 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182613531365 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0735780239054 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0544599501484 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121690596036 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.068797364976 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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