Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
It is undeniably claimed that computers have been making a great contribution to human's life. While some people reckon that it is the most prominent invention, I personally believe that there are also other discoveries that has made people's lives comprehensively change other than the computers over the past hundred years.
First and foremost, human-beings could still be alive without computers but they could not be surviving without medical treatments, especially drugs. It is true that computers have brought people who live in distant areas become closer than ever thanks to improved communication methods but people would have become extinct if no aspirin had been manufactured. The aspirin, which was initiated in the 1890s, became the leading contributor to mitigating diseases such as fever and pains that might have killed millions of people all over the world.
Additionally, when it comes to catastrophic warnings, computers may rank the second, following the space discoveries, including aircrafts and satellites. Due to the positive outcomes from launches of rockets into the space, satellites are able to capture the pictures of the entire world's surface, analyze them and generate early alerts of foreseeable disasters. Initially, the statistics from satellites were sent to simple screen and human's brains did necessary research to find out the abnormalities of the data, which did not exploit computers' benefits. Apparently, the invention of rockets and spacecrafts was more significant than that of computers at that time.
To conclude, despite huge advantages of computers, it is profoundly stated that a plenty of other inventions in the history such as medicines and space exploration, deserve to be more appraised.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 187, Rule ID: ALSO_OTHER[1]
Message: Use simply 'there are other' or 'there are also'
Suggestion: there are other; there are also
...nt invention, I personally believe that there are also other discoveries that has made peoples lives...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, first, if, may, second, so, still, while, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1480.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5223880597 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96047701358 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64552238806 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 42.5727612447 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.0 106.682146367 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.4 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0942285036875 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0361713730757 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0200518709501 0.0667982634062 30% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0535124180555 0.151304729494 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.011031446642 0.056905535591 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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