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Some school leavers tend to go travelling or work for a period of time before going to university directly what do you think are the advantages and disadvantages

After graduation from high school,some students tend to travel or work for a period of time instead of going to university immediately. This will have some good effects on study while also disadvantages.

Firstly,we can get knowledge that can't be learned in the class while travelling or working.It can broaden our horizons and exposes us to the real society.Therefore,we will study hard to have a brighter future and try our best to live a better life.Besides,this is a good time to get ourselves refreshed and prepared for a new journey for study.We can be more enthusiastic for study.

Gap year is also a good time for making up for gaps in knowledge.You can take full advantages of the time to review the class you've ever learned and find out your weak parts.Then you can study with focus,which is more efficiently.

On the other hand,being away from school for too long may decrease our ability for adapting to the campus.It can take some time to think of how to learn from dawn to dusk concentratedly.Living in a dormitory with several new people can be a challenge too,especially after a period of time of living in your big house with your family.

In conclusion,travelling or working for a period of time can really make you relaxed and study on focus.It's a good choice if we can take full advantages of.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, if, may, really, so, then, therefore, thus, while, in conclusion, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1100.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 228.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82456140351 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.33722072492 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55701754386 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 347.4 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 20.2975951904 187% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 111.076050024 49.4020404114 225% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 183.333333333 106.682146367 172% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.0 20.7667163134 183% => OK
Discourse Markers: 19.0 7.06120827912 269% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 5.01903807615 458% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251908257263 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14860223298 0.084324248473 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103757898197 0.0667982634062 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16004463275 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0787412603937 0.056905535591 138% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.3 13.0946893788 155% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.37 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.27 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.2 10.1190380762 170% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, if, may, really, so, then, therefore, thus, while, in conclusion, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments