In today's modern world, education has been a heated topic among the public. Some people think that children should get a gap year before going to college, whereas others believe that this trend can cause many negative aspects for student. In my opinion, I am convinced that this trend have benefits as well as drawbacks.
On the one hand, I think student will gain many positive aspects and even opportunaties if they decide to get a gap year after studying in high school. The first and most important is that it could create time for student to explore themselve and help them get brighter career. It is simply because during school times, student have to spend all time they have on many compulsory subjects which those are not their strength such as math, physical and so on. Therefore, a lot of student after learning in high school do not know what university is suitable for them and it also make them ambiguous in their career future. Secondly, a gap year is precious time to help student reduce stress by traveling with family or hanging out with their friends.
On the other hand, it is obvious that this trend could lead some negative aspects for children. The first thing is that student can be dragged on many negative activities such as playing computer games too much, smoking and neglect their targets in the future. It is due to the fact that instead of utilizing a gap year to explore themselve, almost young people spend their time on flogging working, surfing social media with considering about their future. Moreover, this trend will lead to the lack of labour of some countries around the world.
In conclusion, while reducing stress and creating time to explore strength student's are two main benefits, lack of labour and dragging on negative activities are two serious drawbacks of this trend.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 469, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun student seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of students'.
Suggestion: a lot of students
...as math, physical and so on. Therefore, a lot of student after learning in high school do not kn...
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Line 2, column 577, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'makes'?
Suggestion: makes
...ersity is suitable for them and it also make them ambiguous in their career future. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, whereas, while, i think, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1509.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82108626198 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35758503303 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552715654952 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.5958293312 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.076923077 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0769230769 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.2307692308 7.06120827912 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138791027116 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0488020021021 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0457062862675 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0765035376531 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0421156416058 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 50.2224549098 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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