Some school leavers travel or work for a period of time instead of going directly to university.What are the advantages and disadvantages.
Students will be the future of next automation world in 21st century.A little number of students who had completed their higher secondary study may travel or do work for a proportion of time instead of directly going university.There are some merits and demerits for this situation that would addressed with examples in ensuing paragraph.
Considering the advantages of school leavers, the foremost one is that knowledge.By which I mean that it is better to gain a small amount of information before admit to university so that it will help individuals to make bright career in right direction according to interest of each student.Other benefit is that the experience.This point state that school dropouts,who are really willing to work before going to college;by which they can learn the methodology that apply in real world and also get a maximum amount of practical knowledge which will help during studying in university.In addition,some students want to stress out due to long time of study so they can get relax by which they can reduce burden of education before admitting in higher education.
On the other hand, there are some demerits of this situation.The prior one is that wrong direction of career;that means, sometimes,students who do not get proper guidance regarding choosing the right stream to make a better future.Ultimately,they do not learn proper knowledge about their interest.
To recapitulate,it can be seen that if school leavers can get work or travel before admit into university,they can refresh their mind and get experience by doing work and then make a great career.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, really, regarding, second, so, then, i mean, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 17.0 7.30460921844 233% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1351.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23643410853 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.25510558924 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573643410853 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 64.0 20.2975951904 315% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 215.738701906 49.4020404114 437% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 337.75 106.682146367 317% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 64.5 20.7667163134 311% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 22.5 7.06120827912 319% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216734630628 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133233421677 0.084324248473 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0734079293949 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133233421677 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0734079293949 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 35.5 13.0946893788 271% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 6.52 50.2224549098 13% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 28.3 11.3001002004 250% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.0 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.73 8.58950901804 125% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 30.0 9.78957915832 306% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 27.6 10.1190380762 273% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 28.0 10.7795591182 260% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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