Some shops are open 24 hours a day and 7 days a week Do you think it is a good thing for the customer shop staff and company as a whole

Today's world is 24 hours running, so are the people and the businesses around the globe. The society more time to utilize if shops are opened 24 hours and 7 days a week. The concept surely benefits the customer, shop staff and the company.

Nowadays there are lot of demands of customers that goes day and night. They might need medicines for child or some old aged person at night. Also for working class, as they have strict working hours, they can shop anytime. They donot have to wait for weekends to purchase even daily need items, as customers would be fewer at night times.

Clearly, this cocept is useful for shop staff too. There would be more jobs both part time and full time. Staff can have flexible working hours. Even students can work at evening shift or morning shift and earn their needs. Also at times, company give discounts to the staff members.

Most importantly, company will have maximum benefit as it will have working hours as a result sales are enhanced. Also it can pack delivery orders at night when customers will be fewer.

In contrast, there can be security reasons during night hours. Fear of theft , robbery would always persist.

In conclusion, the 24 hours shop are boon for customer, shop staff, company and for the society in all.

Votes
Average: 6.6 (9 votes)

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Also,
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Suggestion: fulltime
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Suggestion: Also,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, in conclusion, in contrast, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 41.998997996 40% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1059.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 223.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74887892377 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.12522038923 2.80592935109 76% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582959641256 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 313.2 506.74238477 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.5318224301 49.4020404114 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 62.2941176471 106.682146367 58% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.1176470588 20.7667163134 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.11764705882 7.06120827912 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 3.4128256513 322% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281394689547 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0972968382056 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119384611516 0.0667982634062 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168741703972 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.15438862309 0.056905535591 271% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 13.0946893788 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 50.2224549098 150% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 11.3001002004 53% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.38 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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