Some sports are extremely dangerous but many people still like them very much. Why do people take part in this dangerous sports? Give some suggestions on how to deal with these dangers.
Sports has become ubiquitous nowadays, out of which some are dangerous and still many people are keen about it. Many reasons have surfaced for such occurrences; however a few productive suggestions can resolve the situation to a large extent. Both the causes and measures are discussed further with examples.
Examining the reasons, the most common is that they get thrill out of them and enjoy taking risks. This is because they face new challenges everyday which helps them prepare to face competitions of the competitive global world. When they come across face-to-face competitions they feel a great sense of satisfaction. For instance, rock climbing, performing stunts on vehicles, jumping from tall buildings, etc. are such scary sports that they enjoy doing by putting their life in danger. The other prime reason is that by challenging such sports they get fame and money out of it. By this, I mean that they are hired by sports company or film industry to perform such hazardous sports. For example, by executing such hilarious sports they get a chance to come on television, also, their names get recorded in Guinness book of world record. Despite this, their names come on the headline of newspaper which makes them feel proud for themselves as well as their country.
However, a few productive measures can really help to overcome this situation. The most imperative step is that the sports company, providing training should hold a valid license. Moreover, sufficient training should be provided under strict supervision of adults. Furthermore, it is vital to take safety precautions before conducting such sports. Also, adolescents should be kept away from this and awareness should be created amongst them about the dangers of carrying out such life-threatening sports.
Thus, to put in a nutshell, I pen down saying that such dangerous sports are carried out by those who are addicted to them and wants to face new challenges in their life for being famous and earn money out of it. However, some precautions can be taken by educating juveniles at an younger age.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, moreover, really, so, still, thus, well, for example, for instance, i mean, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1747.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1081871345 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70648588251 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567251461988 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 523.8 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.0233796073 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.9473684211 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.21052631579 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191793451194 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0608961541904 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.065917491486 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12806042374 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0576288036781 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.