Some sports are extremely dangerous but many people still like them very much. Why do people take part in dangerous sports? Give some suggestions on how to deal with these dangers?
There is no doubt that sport is an important part of our daily life. Although some sports are considered highly dangerous, many people adore these types of sports. This essay will highlight the reason for individual's involvement in these sports and suggest a couple of propositions to tackle such an activity.
To begin with, many people participate in extreme sports for the excitement it provides. This because these form of events gives out a sense of rush and adrenaline to its viewers and performers. For instance, many people feel excited when they witness an extreme sport like, wrestling or boxing. As a result, a huge proportion of the population find themselves attracted to these sorts of sports.
Of all the various suggestions that can be provided to handle dangerous sports, a crucial one is providing assign a stand-by health care team. The reason for this is to provide immediate medical attention if needed as it there tends to be a high chance of injury in these types of events. Furthermore, the need to be employ security officials to facilitate the safety of crowds attending extreme sports. This is a suggestion because the crowds usually need to be controlled through several safe measurements via trained figures.
In conclusion, the main reason for people with taking various parts in dangerous sports is due to the sense of euphoria that it supplies, and the idea of employing security,as well as medical teams are two suggestions they need to put into consideration to deal with this type of danger.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 173, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , as
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, as a result, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1287.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04705882353 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78078760428 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58431372549 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 398.7 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.7525193208 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.25 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.25 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32132756352 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110179262221 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0908581997098 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197044088572 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0798358521409 0.056905535591 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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