some state that studying in European countries is better than studying in Iran. to what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
The question of whether studying in European countries is better than studying in Iran has always been an important question to me. Personally speaking, I really prefer to study in European country mainly because of three reasons: firstly, there is a good connection between industry and university, secondly, there is freedom in such countries, and thirdly, we can find very good facilities.
As for the first reason, the connection between industry and university has significant effects on job prospects of students. With the lack of this feature in educational system of a country like Iran, all of the discoveries and scientific investigations stay at the level of theory. This situation leads to thousands of unemployed students that have graduated. For example, I spent about two years of my life on my M.A thesis; however hard I tried to my best to communicate with industry, it resulted in almost nothing.
As for the second reason, freedom plays an important role in having peace of mind. Unfortunately, in universities of Iran there is no freedom as far as they determine how to wear clothes for students. It may be laughable to tell that in our university it is forbidden for girls and boys to stand with each other. If an educational system disregards elementary rights of students, is it possible to study there?
As for third reason, the facilities of a university are very effective on the results of investigations. If there is an update laboratory facility, most of the results will be exact and we can compare our results with other researchers all over the world. This comparison gives us the opportunity to be seen by most of well-known professors.
To conclude, with these reason in mind, I predict that students can enjoy their academic life in European country and I also predict that most of Iranian students will migrate to European country in the near future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHETHER[3]
Message: Wordiness: Shorten this phrase to the shortest possible suggestion.
Suggestion: Whether; The question whether
The question of whether studying in European countries is bette...
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Line 2, column 202, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...cational system of a country like Iran, all of the discoveries and scientific investigatio...
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Line 2, column 418, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: A
...pent about two years of my life on my M.A thesis; however hard I tried to my best...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, may, really, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well, as for, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1577.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99050632911 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93735500039 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550632911392 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.2319619366 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.642857143 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5714285714 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92857142857 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199790305943 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0640939283183 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0768466706337 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107718704253 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0723764276443 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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