Education is the utmost priority of every individual. For this reason, nowadays certain universities are providing the facility to study online. I opine, this trend has both positive and negative impacts. Following essay shall discuss both aspects accompanied with some examples and their effects.
Acquiring education online is much more convenient for people who want higher posts but due to tiresome working hours they cannot upgrade their qualification level and also those who start working even before completing their basic education. Moreover, stay at home moms benefit the most from such education system. Supporting the positive aspects of this trend I will quote few examples with evidences. In the first place, certain people who are forced to work at a very young age because of several unfavorable circumstances, for instance, supporting their family financially or due to lack of proper education system or resources, such system of learning can help them in completing their studies further. By such mode of education they can sign up any time and attend classes from anywhere while working, therefore, not interrupting their working hours. Second example is of people who are trying to achieve better designations in workplace but due to degree barrier they cant do so. In order to achieve proper education without taking time off from work; online education is the best option. They can work and study both at the same time. I will give example of myself here as a stay-at-home mother. Such facility has helped me in improving my degrees to a much higher extent; by studying and looking after my home and children at the same time. For me it is a blessing in disguise.
On the contrary, there is a negative side to it as well. Although online study is accessible to people but it lacks discipline. The old school method of going for education, taking classes, making friends, meeting assignment deadlines are all the missing factors in such educational system, which in fact plays a vital role in personality development. Sometimes, it can over burden a person as well if he fails to manage his work and study life simultaneously.
In my opinion, online education is better option for those who are unable to conduct their education at a proper time due to certain reasons, but if you are resourceful and can manage, then getting education through proper channel is the best option.
To conclude, online education has both good and bad aspects but good is definitely out weighs bad.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 977, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...orkplace but due to degree barrier they cant do so. In order to achieve proper educa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, moreover, second, so, then, therefore, well, while, for instance, in fact, in my opinion, on the contrary, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2099.0 1615.20841683 130% => OK
No of words: 414.0 315.596192385 131% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07004830918 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51076378781 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71451269968 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 176.041082164 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550724637681 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 673.2 506.74238477 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.8188934145 49.4020404114 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.9523809524 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7142857143 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.28571428571 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179300409679 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0590691158959 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0547944433788 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0975072959633 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0786621485032 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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