Studying on internet has become a popular trend nowadays. However, some educational institutes now provide their study materials on the Internet to teach scholars online. While, this has several negative effects but, I believe the positivities of this development are more significant.
Admittedly, sharing the courses on internet with their students has some negative effects. Firstly,
students who take online classes do not interact with teachers and other students. Also, the environment of taking online classes is not suitable because, studying alone can make a victim of depression and laziness. For instance, in India, scholars who take online classes becomes more lazy rather than being energetic. On the flip side the development of taking online classes have many positive effects. First and foremost, taking online classes saves much time and cost of several things, such as, hiring a taxi to go to university and expense of food.
In addition, taking online classes is very advantageous for those students, whose parents do not allow their children to go to college or universities. For example, most of the students in several countries are still at home because of their parents strictness, so, it is the only way for completing their further studies, also, their parents allow them to study online. Lastly, students who prefer studying alone rather than disturbing environment, so, taking online courses has very positive results for them.
In conclusion,although providing online courses by universities to the students has few negative influences, but, the positive consequences of sharing online classes are more significant in many ways, such as, saving time and money and also for their bright future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, lastly, so, still, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1466.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47014925373 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82261260226 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541044776119 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.2489331283 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.769230769 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6153846154 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.84615384615 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287934727882 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112470462733 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0851508173389 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191095161467 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108394320244 0.056905535591 190% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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