Online learning is being considered as an option to replace traditional classrooms at many universities. In my opinion, there are some positives for learning on online platforms.
Firstly, distance barriers can be erased thank to online platforms. International students can join courses in foreign without moving abroad. For example, a Vietnamese student would be learned speaking skill with native teachers living in America to enhance their English skill at home. Moreover, online courses are able to assist a lot of students to save travelling time if they live far away from their school. Secondly, lower costs and the widespread presence of the internet are likely to bring a lot of benefits for people who desire higher education but financial and living conditions. For instance, there are office workers who are busy for their work during a day can join online courses at midnight or in their spare time.
Apart from the practical concerns expressed above, I also believe that online learning may be more attractive than traditional classrooms are. This is because that many effects on slides shown on their gadgets with images and sounds can help learners understand lessons easily. In addition to this, students can find documents quickly whenever they need. Furthermore, online courses are able to bring students conveniences in saving. This is due to that after every lessons, learners can save them on their learning tools. For example, a student can save tasks he has done when he joins an online class. After that, he can review them whenever he wants.
In conclusion, I believe online learning that can be an alternative to traditional classrooms brings positives.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 194, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to speak'.
Suggestion: to speak
..., a Vietnamese student would be learned speaking skill with native teachers living in Am...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, apart from, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1436.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26007326007 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68319456389 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589743589744 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.8856960123 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.75 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0625 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0625 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137281396883 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0518742839996 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0431178616748 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106179914265 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0301669668045 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.93 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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