Some working parents believe childcare centers can provide the best care for their children. Others believe that family members like grandparents can do a better job. Discuss both view and give your opinion
There is a hot debate over who is suitable for taking care of children. While busy parents have a belief that their children should be sent to childcare house, I think that family members are more crucial for childcare.
On the one hand, it is undeniable that childcare center is attractive for children on account of several reasons. Firstly, there is a team of professional high-skilled caregivers with an educational course prepared carefully. Therefore, children can be well-educated since childhood, which paves the road for them on their intellectual development. In addition, no sooner do baby is sent to the baby center than they stand a chance of make acquaintances with new other friends at the same age. As a result, not only their interpersonal skill is increasingly enhanced at the early age, but also this will bring to children a sense of delight and happiness.
On the other hand, I have more belief that family members play a more integral role in childcare. The first main reason can be mentioned is, it is the unconditional love received from their grandparents that nurture their grandchildren’s passion since the early age, which may help them to fulfill their dreams. The next essential justification is, since family members do not have to be responsible for a numerous of children, they can pay more attention for their child for the sake of the health of their baby. For example, if their baby gets severe diseases, such as fever or sore throats, grandparents can divert all day on taking care of them. The last but not least important extent is, interacting regularly to grandparents since childhood can make children become more close to their family. Therefore, this may lay the foundation for tightening the long-lasting family bond as well as preserving traditional family culture values.
In conclusion, although some industrious parents argue that kindergarten is indispensable for the development of their child, I am of the opinion that it is more necessary for children to be taken care by their family members.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 669, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'not the least'.
Suggestion: not the least
...ay on taking care of them. The last but not least important extent is, interacting regula...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, so, therefore, well, while, for example, i think, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1725.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10355029586 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0409898275 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550295857988 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 533.7 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0408562429 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.214285714 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1428571429 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7857142857 7.06120827912 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300505873002 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108746336551 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0565463474082 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194399655138 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0360467615533 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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