Children should necessarily have one or other to take care of them. Few job doing mothers and fathers think that play schools can take adequate care of their children while others believe that elder people in the family can take care of their children. In my view, Grand parents can take more attention rather than creche people.
In many houses, fathers parents or mothers parents stay with the children and take care of their grandchildren. In individuals houses they take care of one or two kids unlike child care areas where large number of people are to be monitored. In addition, When a kid is suffering from ill health and is at home obviously the elders at home will stop all their duties and concentrate completely on their kids. Moreover, They can also teach the kids about the basic subjects, manners along with behavior sitting at home thus reducing expenditure on play school.
On the other hand, Few parents give importance for joining their kiddos in creche as they are busy with their jobs and hectic schedule. There are many advantages of this procedure such as baby gets habituated to the school environment. Along with this the interpersonal skills of the babies are enhanced as they get in touch with many same aged children and as well as adults. However, the day care staff cannot concentrate greatly on individual subjects.
To summarize, Though both grand parents and play school people can take care of the children. In my view, elder parents can more effectively concentrate on their subjects. Nevertheless, In creche, individual baby care may not be possible because of great count of children
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, thus, well, while, in addition, such as, as well as, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1344.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9594095941 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53461755728 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531365313653 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 412.2 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.7018742288 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3571428571 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.85714285714 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268440161704 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10027087062 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0845694530106 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182401838237 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0839074194253 0.056905535591 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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