Some young people like to copy the behavior clothes of famous people. Why might this be the case? What problems might it cause?
These days, youngsters tend to follow the characteristics and style of well-known people. Various defenses leave behind this tendency, and I still believe that copy can arise many issues.
Various reasons explain why people prefer copying celebrities' behavior and clothes, such as the wave of trends and the admirable. First and foremost, everyone considers their celebrities as a symbol of status. They wear a skirt or boots from brands that are considered the latest trend. For instance, every page of fashion magazines takes advantage of their fame to boost sales by introducing what popular actors or singers wear on social platforms and in newspapers. Furthermore, fans show how they admire and respect by following all styles and getting into daily lifestyles, and also hope to gain more attention among their friends and the public for luxurious lifestyles.
It seems to me that they copy other styles and clothes, such as losing their identity and the negative influence. The first cause is that everyone gains more happiness with their styles rather than copying someone by wearing something similar or acting like them. As a result, they saturate in the crowd, lack confidence, and compare beauty standards. Nevertheless, some influencers have negative behavior and adverse acknowledgment, so it easily brainwashes and acts as their bad behavior. For example, some take part in illegal activities such as drugs or smoking, which are harmful to our health. Therefore, the celebrities in question may not be the best role models.
In conclusion, although the young generation attempts to copy famous personalities to become popular and improve confidence, failure in those trials can sometimes exacerbate the situation by causing imprisonment and affecting mental health.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, may, nevertheless, so, still, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1507.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42086330935 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84254837404 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.669064748201 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.0805983044 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.642857143 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8571428571 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.92857142857 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155492810576 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0443714029324 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0481830786552 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0812917139185 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0234903415078 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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