Somw people believe that when designing a building, the most important thing to consider is the function rather than the outward appearance. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is true that many individuals believe that function of a construction is of paramount importance rather than external architecture. In my opinion, while I agree that focusing on the core function is top priority, I contend that the latter factor is equally vital.
On the one hand, there are several evidences why the main purpose of a building is of the essence when considering erecting a specific block. Schools, for example, are constructed to instruct students, ranging from primary schools to tertiary education. Therefore, these should be builded with a wide range of classrooms suitable for learners and other educational facilities such as laboratories, computers, and so on. Another prime example is museums, which are erected to show a variety of exhibitions like artefacts, inveontions or works of art. If architects disregard the fundamental function of these buildings, then it is highly likely that students would not study effectively, viewers to these museums would feel bored and frustrated in default of diverse exhibits.
On the other hand, outer design of a construction should not be underestimated seeing that it could be the initial factor that draw the attention of users at the first sight. It is true that an eye-catching structural design would capture others' attention compare with an old building although the inside facilites are fabulous and sufficient. Users could also feel motivated and comfortable if they are in a well- designed and elagant blocks. In turn, they could harness effectively and efficiently the inferior tools and facilities thanks to the congenial atmosphere created by these magnificent buildings, meaning that main function of these construction could be harness to the full.
In conclusion, I maintain that both factors: purposes and exterior design of a building are equally important and deserve consideration of architects and builders.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 640, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this construction' or 'these constructions'?
Suggestion: this construction; these constructions
...uildings, meaning that main function of these construction could be harness to the full. In con...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, then, therefore, well, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1610.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42087542088 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05284915993 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592592592593 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.0841784903 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.166666667 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.75 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110378056062 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0419937324255 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0501533911276 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0780661395984 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0551444723962 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.77 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.