Space travelling is likely to be developed and pervasive in the future and it seems appealing to the mojority of human being. Although a new form of travel can make progress for finding the secrets of the universe, its improvent will possibly compromise the envrionment and give rise to comparing.
Having a space travel can be detrimental to the space because of the harmful fume and rubbish. Heaps of fossil fuel is going to be used to start the shuttle througout the tour, so the emission of carbon dioxide will dramactically increase, polluting the air severly. Meanwhile, on the way to the universe, the shuttle will automatically tear some of parts of itself and then dropped it to the space. In additon, there is no any approach to collect the relic it obseletes during the travel thereby doing harm to the environment of the space.
Another setbacks of a visit to the space is that people may compare with each other for the large sum of money it costs.
Specific trainning for travellers, construction of a shuttle and the equippments it needs are all pricey but necessary, which are only affordable for the rich. For this reason, those who want to show off their wealth are dying to participate in such expensive tour and they probrably ask for more like a more luxury look of the interior of the shuttle. And it will give rise to comparing in public and neglect the susbstance of a space travel.
On the other hand, flying to the space might prompt the discovery of the mystery in space since people find it intriguing. After seeing how large the universe is, some of them can be motivate and want to know more about it. For instance, children may engaging in space researches or choose to major concerning space in the future, thus improving the pace human reveal the emiga of the space.
In conclusion, a space travel's disadvantages outweigh its advantages for the contaminant and waste it produces and the comparing between the affluents.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, may, so, then, thus, while, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1619.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77581120944 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67964186114 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554572271386 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.4564761385 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.642857143 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2142857143 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35714285714 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.33510034067 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126499114707 0.084324248473 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0897261138207 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16747611886 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0753063020697 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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