It can be seen that television plays an imperative role in people's life as a stress remover however, TV makes people less active in work and stop them from being socialized. I agree with this given notion because watching TV is not a kind of exercise and the hours spend by individuals are too high.
To commence with, generally individuals used to watch television after finish their either work or education. TV makes them stress less and give entertainment but due to this routine, people often become lazy less active cause when they watch TV in single position, it can effect on joints and also can harm their eyes. No one organs of body are in movement while watching TV, makes them less active mentally and physically. To illustrate, a report from the student of oxford university reveals that over 80% young individuals have joints problem,back problems and weak eyes just because of watching television continuously for 2 to 3 hours.
Furthermore, after finishing their work at workplace, most of people prefer to sit in front of television ans pass their huge leisure time rather then spending time with family members or neighbors. Therefore, people can not remain in touch afterwards and then being introvert. They can not even enjoy the gathering function . For instance, majority of people avoid attending social function in order to pass their precious time in watching TV and then they become unsocialized.
To conclude, in my perception, people are being less active and unsocialized because they spend massive portion of their free time in front of television and they igonore social gatherings and become introvert as a result.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, so, thus, while, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1339.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88686131387 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55423613294 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510948905109 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 20.2975951904 192% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.735341246 49.4020404114 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 191.285714286 106.682146367 179% => OK
Words per sentence: 39.1428571429 20.7667163134 188% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100799854008 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.054474292284 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0204703002119 0.0667982634062 31% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0691341255202 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0177595918155 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.2 13.0946893788 162% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.89 50.2224549098 63% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.5 11.3001002004 164% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 9.78957915832 291% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 17.6 10.1190380762 174% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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