Agriculture technologies and techniques are being progressively grown day after day. However, some people are still suffering from starvation. In this essay, the main causes as well as possible solutions for this issue will be discussed thouroughly.
The cultivation advances have been increased markedly in the last years which in turn has led to an improvement in the quality of crops. Many technologies have been introduced in this field to increase the production of soil, but unfortounately it seems that these efforts can not cope with the growing population worldwide. In my opinion, overpopulation is one of the major reasons for the problem of food deprivation. In addition, the high costs of agriculture is another contributing factor. To harvest, you need to enhance the soil and you will definitely use fertilizers, pesticides, and agricultural machines. That is why the prices are going to be influenced. As a result, poor people are not able to buy foods.
Meanwhile, trying to find solutions for this problem should be a glopal action. Governmental efforts especially in agricultural countries should highlight the importance of controlling population growth. This may be a part of the solution. Another probable answer for the question is that everyone is responsible. Everybody has a role to save foods. Over-use of food should be discouraged. Also, restaurants ought to make the meals only as needed to avoid wasting big amounts.
Furthermore, agricultural lands should be preserved as much as we can. Strict rules and punishment must be applied to protect soil from erosion. Organizing harvested crops is also a must.
To sum up, putting an end to food deprivation and hunger is a multidisciplinary approach that should be shared between individuals in a society and their governmental authorities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, may, so, still, well, while, in addition, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1542.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35416666667 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.26083633851 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618055555556 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.3889238089 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.4285714286 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.7142857143 20.7667163134 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.90476190476 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20072216894 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0550303013037 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0589800179962 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100056912493 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0498330218834 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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