In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry.
Why is this the case?
What can be done about this problem?
Agriculture is the most ancient field that has been being advanced for thousands of years. Despite of that, the number of starved people all around the world is still existent. In this essay, we will discuss about the reasons as well as the solutions of this issue.
From my point of view, among a bunch of reasons of hunger, crisis situations and environmental conditions of where people live are the main causes. In fact, most of the people who have been struggling to get the daily meals live in the poorest countries where wars, riots and a high rate of inflation are happening such as Venezuela, Zimbabwe, Syria and so on. Due to the unstable situations, citizens could not peacefully work to earn money for buying foods, and also do not produce enough aliments to supply to all the civilians. Moreover, lands where the climate is truly harsh such as very hot or cold and dry are difficult for plants to grow in. Therefore, inhabitants could not plant any staple crops such as rice, corn, cassava, potatoes to nourish themselves. For instance, children in Africa countries have the highest rate of malnutrition in the world.
Finding out the solutions needs to be based on these reasons above, making a peaceful environment as well as finding out new methods to against to the harsh climate are necessary. The governments should solve first the crisis problems in their countries, then inhabitants may totally concentrate to working and manufacturing and boost the economy. Hence, they have sufficiently a capacity to take care of their own life and do not starve any longer. Furthermore, to against the unexpected climates, the authorities should promote constructing the greenhouses and also researching to find out species of the plants which may endure a hot and dry weather. As a result, people still could live in such tough soils but with full of crops and fruits.
Brief, besides most of the people have an abundant life with various foods and drinks, there are still the others who face with famine all the time. Even though requiring the efforts of inhabitants, a big aid of governments is principal key to handle and to solve these causes.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, furthermore, hence, if, may, moreover, so, still, then, therefore, well, for instance, in fact, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1804.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 367.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91553133515 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65882816461 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572207084469 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 540.9 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.2491950679 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.75 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9375 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.6875 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120669449397 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0401158133108 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0520145347506 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0902824347576 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0941211414114 0.056905535591 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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