Regardless of the enhancements made in agriculture, starvation and hunger remain existing in our world. In this essay, I would like to further discuss this topic more elaborately.
In our world today, particularly after industrialisation occurred, agriculture became a secondary interest for the more developed countries. Relying generally on the import of goods rather than working on planting because, most probably, from a cost-benefit perspective, it’s better. However, this does not mean that the agricultural sector became abandoned. In fact, enhancement of agricultural methods and tools by initiating soil studies, developing fertilisers and building dams, is in constant achievement.
Furthermore, precisely speaking, take for example the less developed countries, such as African countries, let’s say Kenya. I once came across an essay that talks about how rich Kenya is with fertile soils, yet, many of its inhabitants suffer from extreme famine. This is due to the lack of experience in agriculture whereas, advanced areas which are taken care of to produce consumable crops, are not for the consumption of the Kenyans, but are rather mainly exported to the more developed countries in exchange of money to the government and it is not clear where the money gets invested later on.
In addition, another main problem associated with starvation is poverty. In countries that suffer from severe inflation and the lack of work opportunities like Lebanon and Syria, have accelerating poverty rates because of the drop in the power of purchase.
In conclusion, hunger is an ever growing concern which must be addressed, perhaps by trying to lower poverty rates and increase job opportunities. Besides, establishing a control on the allocation of goods between citizens and most importantly fighting climate change which leads to desertification and harm fertile soils.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, furthermore, however, if, second, so, whereas, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1612.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59722222222 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13562237851 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.652777777778 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.5522737341 49.4020404114 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.0 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1538461538 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07692307692 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117973056803 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0408022753805 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0442654544734 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0662684935865 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0623071171139 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.2 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.05 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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