In spite of advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry.
In our fast paced world there are still a lot of nations who have suffered from hunger, despite all upgrades and projects that were done to the worldwide agriculture. this essay will discuss the main causes of starvation around the planet, including ineffective soil usage and inappropriate costs in world market. this essay also will suggest solutions to these problems, involving better ways of agriculture in developing countries as well as changes in economy.
To start with, a vast amount of people are starving hungry in developing countries, such as Namibia, Nigeria, due to the fact of soil degradation and the cheapest crops. While all usable soil is seeded with vegetables and fruits for foreign markets, the local population suffer from the leak of products in stores and the economy itself. In addition, many farmers use ground for the every year harvest in order to increase sales. Meanwhile, to give an example, there is no either income and benefits, as researches claimed, because countries sell all goods and nothing to the local nation. As a result of these instances, a lot of people are dying from the famine.
Maintaining the sustenance by either various modern ways of agriculture and change the attitude and costs for such counties will definitely make a progress and less starving hungry nations. If costs for products were higher, there would be more possibilities and opportunities for locals, thanks to which they will afford better jobs and better housing. it goes without saying that, furthermore, more upgraded ways of agriculture should be done here, for example, using special cocktail mixture and different average for the soil resting. Therefore, with better quality of life the percentage of starving will decrease, but it is not enough to be aware of these, but also to tackle these issues by acknowledging the government.
To sum up, in today's modern world more and more people are still facing the problem of hunger. this essay discussed how it often caused by making harm to the soil and preposterous attitude to the country in the economy aspect. this essay also suggested that the solutions to this problem are twofold: to increase both the quality of ground and the costs of products which are exported to the whole world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, still, therefore, well, while, for example, in addition, such as, as a result, as well as, to start with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1908.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 375.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.088 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63798711142 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538666666667 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 589.5 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 35.4172588186 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.2 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.8 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.092109150582 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.033948073562 0.084324248473 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0443936908417 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0624731243264 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.041754727411 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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