Despite the improvements in agriculture fields, such as developing way more efficient cultivating methods, food is still highly valued in many parts of the world. A number of people still suffer from starvation in today's world. This essay will discuss the underlying reasons for such major concern and it will then suggest ways to tackle this problems.
One central reason of this problem is the rise in the amount of wasted foor especially in the developed countries. Taking United States as an example, The Time recently reported that the vast majority of groceries are gone to waste by the citizens. This instance clearly reveals a widespread mindset which is called "take and throw-away". The primary potential reason for this mindset to become that common is the tremendous increase in monthly income. Humankind earns more than ever and, consequently they waste way more than ever, relatively to centuries ago.
Fortunately, however, there are plethora of measures that can be taken to handle this issue. As everyone agrees on, countless actual problems coul be ressolved, implementing serious regulations by governments. Likewise, they play a vital role in tackling this issue. Governments could enact laws by which a great amount of wasted food would be saved, as they did for recycling bins. Besides governments and individual efforts, the contribution made by multinational corporations are also needed to handle this issue since they are likely to have more impacts on society and resource than governments. They could organize certain awareness and helping campaigns so that plenty of people deprived from fundamental foods would be rescued.
In conclusion, although the starvation in some parts of the world is still a major concern due to wasting and overconsuming of foods, there is numerous actions to be taken by both governments and international companies.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, however, likewise, so, still, then, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1601.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39057239057 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93838520803 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609427609428 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7077423074 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.733333333 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.13333333333 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212362332433 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0705132311698 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0408168494759 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11933416625 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0406673190573 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.9 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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