spme people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. others say that there are more important environmental problems.
discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In the contemporary society, environment issues and saving endangered animals and plants are of great importance to human’s life. So, some of people suggest that people try to protect species animals and plants more, as a meanwhile, others of those claim that main issues for people is environmental problems. I think that it will be debatable issues for these views but also to me not only every person, also I will discuss both of these sides and present my opinion in this my essay.
On the one hand, the most problems for humans are losing endangered animals and plants. In other words, people and government protect and do not lose such kind of species animals and plants. For this reason, these animals and plants can help and save this world and people without some changes which may not damage fresh air pollution.
On the other hand, environmental problems are getting more and more debatable and questionable day by day. So, some say that people should try to protect environment. If they are able to do, they should be eco- friendly. For this, at schools and other educational spots children and people should be environmentally friendly.
If I say my opinion, environmental problems and losing some species animal and plants may regularly connect. From my point of view, it should be preferable and useful for people and government to save clean atmosphere and protect endangered animals.
If I sum up my views and following sides, environmental issues may cause losing endangered animals and plants. Behind the reason, plants and animals might help fresh air and meat production. Also, we should protect both of sides.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 140, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'some of', you should use 'the' ('some of the people') or simply say ''some people''.
Suggestion: some of the people; some people
...at importance to human's life. So, some of people suggest that people try to protect spec...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, while, i think, kind of, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 10.4138276553 240% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1372.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02564102564 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69506972523 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.494505494505 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.161119949 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.4666666667 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.46666666667 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282866415039 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102416711847 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0773002809717 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167833853463 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.066203748625 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.07 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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