No one can deny, businessmen spend the huge amount on Sportsmans because they know that today sports are the best source for marketing as well as for investment. So, the inclusion of association in sports are rapidly rais. It is a true statement, businesses are also involved in this field alongside owners of large organizations give the money prizes to sportsmen. I will discuss the positive as well as negative sides of this change in the sports as well as I will give the appropriate reason, why I held this point.
To commence with, In the whole world, sports event also organized an extremely huge level such an Olympic, Asian games events, Austrialain games and many more. An ample of, talented players are do participate in this event. When enterprises tycoons invest the money in the game events as well as those organizations choose the best player as the brand ambassador of their company and it is the great opportunity for sportspeople. Secondly, organizations also organized on the national level or international sports events in these matches those companies select the best players and purchase those players in extremely huge amounts. Take India as an example. Every year, IPL cricket matches are organized in India. In these matches, businessmen and a lot of celebrities made their own teams and they select the played by their own choice but they must be given the huge amount to that player for play in their team. This is immensely beneficial for sportsperson as well as for the future.
Moreover, when an organization select the best players it also gives the motivation for that player who is select in the team instead of it also do work as an inspiration for that player who plays at a small level. One of the major positive aspects of this change is that, when organizations involve in the sports, they give the a number of amenities to players. This change also plays an essential role in order to the growth of this field.
To conclude, involvement of business in the games is a positive change. It provided the numerous facilities to players as well as for development of games.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, as for, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1752.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 362.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83977900552 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75919700207 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.486187845304 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 553.5 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.7056543543 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.058823529 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2941176471 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.94117647059 7.06120827912 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177453255564 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0630987525754 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0474877585932 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129546322481 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0543253605844 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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