In recent times, a large number of the population are living the sedentary lifestyle. Today, people having a gym and other facilities but the sedentary lifestyle is become a popular among numerous people in the whole world. This essay will explain the problem as well as give the appropriate solution to this social issue.
It is apparent that the inactive lifestyle brings a lot of problems and the people who live this kind of life, they will face health issues in future. One of the major problem is that, serious health diseases such as heart issues, back pain, obesity will be came with a sedentary lifestyle. Take a research report of the world health organization (WHO)as an example, The WHO report claim that, 75% of dangerous diseases are generated because of a number of people are giving the preference to live an inactive lifestyle. Another problem is that, if people live this lifestyle, after a few time they will habitual with sedentary life. In the upcoming times, they can not easily change their lifestyle. Those people always avoid the hardworking jobs, which become a disadvantage for their career because they can not able to move theirself from a lazy lifestyle.
Moreover, Although sedentary life has a lot of problems, solutions are also available. Firstly, those people who live an inactive lifestyle, they do not have awareness about the harms of this kind of lifestyle. So, the government should give the awareness programs, which helps them to change their lifestyle. Secondly, those people who are habitual with lazy life. they can do some exercise like they can go to the gym, do yoga. which are fruitful for changing lifestyle as well as they live a healthy life.
To conclude, no one can deny, a sedentary life having a lot of disadvantages and people will face numerous problems. If they got awareness and do exercises on daily basis as a result they will live a fit and active life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
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Suggestion:
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun time seems to be countable; consider using: 'few times'.
Suggestion: few times
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
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Suggestion: Which
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, kind of, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1601.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89602446483 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57389549963 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.483180428135 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 528.3 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.5835341381 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.1764705882 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2352941176 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.47058823529 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16599586661 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0662497294513 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0454439794556 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125973602353 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0804574015375 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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