Sports are generally liked by everyone especially kids. Interestingly, sports have a positive influence on children and thus should be encouraged at home or in school as well. To what extent do you agree?
Sports have become more and more commonly adorable in some particular places in the world. As it is holding manifold merits for people in all age, especially children, hence I strongly emboldened this activities at any workplace. However, I also believe that having a good diet is crucial.
First of all, athletics strengthen health. Regular sports certainly make the heart stronger, which will pump the blood smoothly. Furthermore, the enhancement of physical development of children is certainly the most important contribution of sports for children. According to WHO, once kid who does exercises regularly can high 3 to 5 centimeters than a kid who don’t while they are in the same age. This means that your job opportunities can be multiplied as no one want to hire an employee who has a history of illnesss.
On the second hand, through playing sports, youngsters can develop social skill like negotiation while they are an arbitration, team building such as football or hockey, which is often felt to be excellent preparation for adulthood. The people who play sports are active and more confident. Besides, they can expand relationship easier.
Despite being a supporter of doing exercises, I strongly recommend incorporating a reasonably eating regime. It will not effect how much a child workout although he does not abstain from junk food, which is wasted time. Otherwise, having in diet makes the feeling is better and it can minimize the problem of skin, mental, etc. Case in point, a lot of children do not have enough time for sports because of a ton of homework they must do, so the best way for them is choosing a proper dietary.
To conclude, it appears to me that sports have an essential role of life, especially for children, thus it should be boost for everyone at any place. But it will much more better if each individual can combine doing exercises and having a good diet.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, second, so, then, thus, while, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1593.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96261682243 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77909208918 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632398753894 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.7057341826 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.7058823529 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8823529412 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.58823529412 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21948789109 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0645828272637 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0603996340387 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128665520435 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0590679113177 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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