Since few decades inclusion of associations in sports have been immensely increased. These organizations are pouring a great amount of money on sports persons to branding their products .However this trend has several pros and cons, my essay will discuss both view in further paragraphs.
To begin with, since these business tycoons have stepped in field of sports the quality of tournaments have greatly improved because these entrepreneurs choose the most performing players as a brand ambassador of their products this perspective has lead other players to perform their heart out to be in limelight of company owners. secondly, there are numerous players at state levels who have capability to perform on higher stage but due to financial crises they replace their profession with other work but now it is seen that numerous organizations step ahead to save rare talents from darkness of anonymity, for example, in 2018 sprinter was struggling to have a pair of running shoes, then addidas company came forward to support her later she won gold medal in world championship for the India and right after that she became brand face for addidas.
Sports teams and leagues are not immune from economic shocks. Demand for sports entertainment depends on the overall economic climate. Prolonged weakness in the economy following the 2008 financial crisis hurt attendance at many sporting events for years. More recently, the COVID-19 pandemic prevented many sports venues from hosting fans in person and many games were postponed or cancelled due to illness among team members and staff. But most average Americans view sports as good entertainment that can be enjoyed when there is extra income to spend.
In addition, from an economist's perspective, demand for attending sporting events is elastic. In other words, a change in someone's income downward or a change in the costs of the products,ticket prices upward) will have a material impact on final demand (ticket, merchandise, and pay-per-view sales. These are the hard economic facts about why sports investments can be risky, but perhaps less apparent are the exogenous or human factors that investors should be attuned to that present at least equivalent business risk. Moreover It seems that every day we hear about a sports scandal more sensational or unbelievable than the day before. These scandals can hurt a sports brand. Allegations of child sexual abuse at Penn State University, for instance, not only hurt the school's reputation, but apparel sales dropped significantly as a result.3 Other incidents such as one where NBA players jumped into the crowd and brawled with fans harmed the reputation of the NBA brand
Furthermore, greed is everywhere in these businesses: Stars in these leagues make much more annually than the average consumer. The point here is that these businesses present risks to investors that are not traditionally part of the business. If employees of a major corporation went on strike, the company's stocks would most likely get hammered in the short term. If the CEO of a blue-chip company decided they weren't going to report to work for months, or hold out for more money, these companies would face serious repercussions from investors.
In my opinion, though there are scandals about players using performance-enhancing drugs, which should be discouraged ,these situations are under control. And it is not necessarily wrong for companies to sponsor sports with extraordinary prize money, which not only helps to promote players’ skills and ensure their livelihood but also creates high-quality sports events that generate economic growth as well as encourage people to get more exercise to keep healthy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, well, at least, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 79.0 41.998997996 188% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3134.0 1615.20841683 194% => OK
No of words: 591.0 315.596192385 187% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30287648054 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.93056706295 4.20363070211 117% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80271700067 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 338.0 176.041082164 192% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571912013536 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 948.6 506.74238477 187% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 123.639799418 49.4020404114 250% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 156.7 106.682146367 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.55 20.7667163134 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.45 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175575051855 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0551231443563 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0346316619388 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.092896632588 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0210473923258 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 13.0946893788 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 162.0 78.4519038076 206% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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