There is no exaggeration in saying that, adverts are playing a pivotal role in Today's world, in comparing, selecting and buying things. Some masses believe that commercials are greatly assisting them in purchasing things, while others opine that these promotional videos do not make any impact on their buying patterns consequently they avoid watching them. This essay will examine both points of views then explain why I believe that this trend is beneficial in several aspects on the contrary over-reliance is not a great idea because some adverts are promoted to circumvent people.
To begin with, there are numerous reasons, why people find promotional videos too convenient before owning certain products. Firstly, adverts inform about basic features of a particular product, for example, when a TV commercial is played some folks gaze in a tempted way until it disappears from screens in order to obtain details about the products which they are looking forward to buying next. Secondly, advertisement provides them various alternatives to chose various brand items according to their price ranges and whichever they find the more attractive they buy those products either from the nearest store or through online shopping.
On the other hand, a considerable number of folks do not find adverts useful in fact that are interrupting and unnecessary for them. Firstly, they know these are just to lure consumers, however, there are thousands of commercials are shown on television, social media, newspaper, magazines for a single reason to earn profit by fooling people with the tempting ways. Moreover, these advertisements are not always true, for example, once a medical expert was live on a television show and expressing his opinion about a product name named as high grow height increaser, he said there is nothing like which can increase human's height after the age of 21 years except few expensive surgeries but still I don't believe why people are wasting their money on a useless product meanwhile few viewers made a call on contact numbers which were provided on the TV screen and complained about that product that we had been using since six months eventually we found this was a complete wastage of money.
In conclusion, although, the promotional videos are providing a helping hand in purchasing consumer goods yet people should bear in mind that they do not fall into a lucrative and attractive commercial trap.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, however, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, then, while, for example, in conclusion, in fact, on the contrary, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2047.0 1615.20841683 127% => OK
No of words: 394.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19543147208 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45527027702 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70188721869 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 249.0 176.041082164 141% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631979695431 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 624.6 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 20.2975951904 192% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 136.495018224 49.4020404114 276% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 204.7 106.682146367 192% => OK
Words per sentence: 39.4 20.7667163134 190% => OK
Discourse Markers: 18.8 7.06120827912 266% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141764022756 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0534506881197 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0182713722331 0.0667982634062 27% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0779751328509 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0251504418142 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.8 13.0946893788 174% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.89 50.2224549098 63% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.5 11.3001002004 164% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.94 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.6 10.1190380762 174% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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