The spread of multinational companies and the increase globalisation produce positive effect for everyone. Do you agree or disagree?
It is undeniable fact that, these days, multinational companies are opened in many parts of the world as well as due to the internet people live in a global village, rather than big planet earth. It is believed by some that these both factors would be influenced positively on the communities. If asked, I certainly disagree with such an opinion and the reason for my stand will be analyzed further.
There are several negative influences created by MNCs. Firstly, it would create a negative impact on local businesses. What I mean to say by this is that, the international companies are more financially strong then the local once, therefore they are able to use a lot of money to produce high quality product for consumers, also enables to advertise their products on different media platforms, such as television radio and newspaper. Those advertising lured the people, as they are willing to buy a MNC produced materials, it would reduce the sales of local producing products. According to research, after opening outlets of Nike's footwear in India, the sales of Indian footwear company was reduced by 23%.
Furthermore, globalization also create a negative influence on the local culture. By this I mean, in millennium days, people from different countries are connected with each other through the internet, they followed the same fashion trend, watching similar TV programs, eating same food etc. These same activities would lead to homogeneous world, as a result the culture diversity would be we take a step back. For example in Japan majority of Japaneses eat European foods, instead of their traditional foods.
On the other hand we can not overlook the benefits of multinational companies to begin with it helps to increase economy of the host missions in other words MNC provide employment to the local residents as the economy of the nation would increase in terms of pay in tax by employees. According to one survey, 23% of employment in India given by the multinational companies. Secondly, globalization also useful for societies. In simple words, people can enable themselves to increase their knowledge about different countries culture, which would be helpful to them in a future, in terms of business opportunity.
In conclusion, I reiterate that MNCs could create a negative impact on local businesses, as they have a fund for producing high quality of products and advertising it, likewise globalization would reduce the culture diversity. However, MNC and globalization also advantageous for the communities, as they create a job and business opportunity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, likewise, look, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, for example, i mean, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, in other words, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2174.0 1615.20841683 135% => OK
No of words: 418.0 315.596192385 132% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2009569378 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52162009685 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95214535527 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 176.041082164 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552631578947 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 691.2 506.74238477 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.7562193632 49.4020404114 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.882352941 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5882352941 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.3529411765 7.06120827912 189% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1354162517 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0425215441577 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0287638392901 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0766613925428 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0348348836953 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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