The spread of multinational companies and the resulting increase of globalization produce positive effects on everyone. Do you agree or disagree?
The question of which the globalizatikn and growth of multinational companies can have a positive effect on people.However, I feel that the proliferation of multinational companies is resonable for everyone, so I will explain the reason here.
Firstly, people in a multi- ethnic company have alternative nationalities and they know how to grow a company. Certainly, the development of multinational companies will be high, because of multinational companies know the culture of another country and the export and important of their products with this country can develop faster. However, whichever product is the faster and highest quality product in the world, people will there positively about this company, think that product has developed quickly because it is satisfactoring quality. For example.if a lot of people work in a company together they make a great contribution to the developmentof the company. Their way a multinational company works in a company can be difficult. Finally, in multinational companies people from different countries can work, which gives a positive impression on develpoment and people subsequent the quality of the product is not the same, it is produced in alternative way.
Of course, some companies or people do not like international companies, due to they do not like proliferationif such companies. They want to run a company with one nation and grow with it also they think that the spread of the business does not require an international company in the growth of globalization and they want us to be know to the world.
In conclusion, I would multi-ethic companies are satisfactory, so you can organize the development of a country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, so, for example, i feel, in conclusion, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1421.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32209737828 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.36065059507 2.80592935109 120% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498127340824 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.3668783357 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.1 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.8 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220737091231 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0937870098962 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.047168716951 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13326312071 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0348337241505 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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