Stores should sell local food products and not the imported food products. To what extend do you agree or not.
The question which is presented is markets should business of food items which manufactured within country and banned the products import from other countries. I totally agree with this suggestion because economy of country depend on it, that directly have beneficial consequences on nation well being and prosperity. In this essay we are going to discuss why local business particularly of food need support and its effects and results.
The food industry is highly important for any nation because everyone utilize ad feed. And it make considerable impact on country economic conditions, therefore stores should sell local products and not with international brand names. As each and every thing we purchase from any factory a small amount goes to government account as tax, but when we buy imported products all profit goes to their countries. As a result economy of nation which is dependent on tax collection from business and industry also decrease, such governments bankrupt. Another negative effect is due to loss in business retailors shut down their factories and try to move in foreign for better prospective, that also have bad impact on revenue collection by officials.
What disadvantages faced by country where primarily food comes from abroad instead of producing locally. The prices of imported thing are also high because of customs duties and transportation charges. And people whose are already living in poverty because of loss of employment as country economy is suffering unable to purchase heighted priced items for survival. Which leads to many other alignment in society. If we buy local manufacturing good such as diary and agricultural products this thing will creates jobs and tax collection which in turn utilize on country betterment.
In conclusion, international big industries products should stop selling in country instead things formed by country own small industries should prefer. Because its help country development and progression by making people happy by using their own money for providing them batter facilities. I also totally support the idea of local consumerism as it in any case benefits nation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 94, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'makes'?
Suggestion: makes
...ecause everyone utilize ad feed. And it make considerable impact on country economic...
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Line 3, column 366, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ase heighted priced items for survival. Which leads to many other alignment in societ...
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'create'
Suggestion: create
...d agricultural products this thing will creates jobs and tax collection which in turn u...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in any case
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1814.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36686390533 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81384433965 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565088757396 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 564.3 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.647444935 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.375 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.125 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225538079153 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0724076312531 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0695362282361 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143560803262 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0349059472042 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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