Stress caused by work is becoming a major problem worldwide. What are the reasons for this? How could this problem be tackled?
There is no doubt that residents have to face a myriad of issues in modern society, especially stress which is becoming a pressing problem in the globe. This phenomenon triggers several reasons and it needs to be addressed by the government as well as individuals.
Some reasons can explain why stress is one of the prominent issues these days. The first explanation is that due to the advanced technology together with fast-paced society, demands of physical and emotional is increasing day by day. This requires that inhabitants must overwork to catch up with the latest trend. For example, with the emergence of AI (Artificial Intelligence), robots are gradually replacing people in different parts of aspects of society such as waiting, calculating, coordinating products, doing housework, translating…. AI outperforms human beings. Therefore,it is extremely important to try their best to refine their knowledge and computer skills. Another reason is that they feel overwhelmed by loads of work. Japanese, for instance, those who spend the whole day sitting in front of a variety of documents and tasks, leading their negative minds, even some seek for dying to escape from work pressures. As a result, too much stress may have a detrimental impact on each personal development.
To deal with this problem, both the authorities and each resident take the responsibility for that. Regarding the government, they need to take action by enacting laws about more days off time during the year for dwellers to recharge their batteries after strenuous days. In addition, the authorities should set out practical programmes about balancing and modifying the emotion and psychology of staff. In terms of individuals, we are aware of suitable jobs by relocating to the new place to avoid the exotic habitats and working. Besides, each person needs to try to learn and enhance pieces of knowledge, information about all aspects and prepare stable emotion with a viewing to coping with every problem in every situation easily and wisely.
In conclusion, we can’t avoid stress from working as well as daily life so every person must find a way to deal with that.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 578, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, if, may, regarding, so, therefore, well, even so, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1812.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19197707736 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87282400966 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621776504298 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 557.1 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.7117906352 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.588235294 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5294117647 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.58823529412 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192240795737 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0562039463084 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0560560213684 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118366937649 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0585934949635 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.