Stress-related illnesses are becoming increasingly common.
What do you think are the causes of this?
What solutions can you suggest?
Sicknesses becomes more and more related with high stress level. This essay will discuss what is causing stress-related illnesses including bad work and life balance and too intense everyday´s schedule. This essay will also suggest two main solutions including taking time for yourself and doing things what is pleasurable and relaxing.
Nowadays in our society people tend to work long hours. The reasons are to attain higher social status and to reach financial stability without considering higher stress level. Many people who decided to work for their own they end up working all the time, that often can cause burnouts. This way of living is not sustainable enough and can not be maintained for a long time because of possible stress-provoked illnesses.
To attain better work and life balance people should spend some time for themselves and do things what brings them relaxation. This could improve many aspects of their life: performance during work could be greater after taking away some tension also it can improve relationship with yourself, possibly bring self-love to their lives. Doing everything what is pleasurable and maintaining slow-living concept can improve well-being and health.
In conclusion, todays highly stressed world is experiencing illnesses evoked by high stress levels. This essay discussed two causes of highly stressed life including poor work and life balance and tensed everyday´s life. This essay suggested two solutions: slow-living concept and time for yourself.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 292, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tions including taking time for yourself and doing things what is pleasurable and...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, well, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 41.998997996 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1293.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 233.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54935622318 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79961920768 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596566523605 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 378.9 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.2487242147 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.4615384615 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9230769231 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.53846153846 7.06120827912 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241248907453 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0917565210251 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.058910831753 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156936798937 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0823741883044 0.056905535591 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.61 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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