students should pay the full cost of their own university studies, rather than have free higher education provided by the state.
In a morden era, education provided by the private and government sectors. Student have plethora of variety to get admission in a private university or government colleges. I completely disagree with the argument to consider free higher education provided by government sector.
Firstly, many private universities are too much costly because of it provided more facilities for the student .In contrast government colleges should give free education but there are no facilities compare to private university such as hostel, developed library, transportation buses. Adding to, the level of teaching knowledge is also higher because of well educated and experience faculty members. While, in government College not more strict to attend lecture and laboratory. For instance, students are not regular because of free nature of the government campus.
Secondly, admission in private university has more demand in a modern student life. After complete the degree education student have big opportunity to get a well salary package job. The private university also held a placement fair during the last year of the student. However, this is a great time for the last year student to get job in further life adding that the universities have to create more value in market compare to other government colleges. During the college life students also aware with the practical knowledge. Private campus has enough equipment to get clear the basic fundamental but government College have not more facility of this kind of laboratory.
To conclude that, I personally believe that private university is better during the college time and also past life for the student rather than the government college.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, for instance, in contrast, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1441.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43773584906 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78388793594 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51320754717 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.8059712297 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.928571429 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9285714286 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.42857142857 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2429697038 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0953072091545 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0499116298726 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165782252495 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0354506054182 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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