Subjects like arts, music and drama are more important than other subjects and therefore should be given more time in the calendar. Do you agree or disagree?
Art is to humans what the sun is to plants. Some courses such as art, music, and drama have a role in our life and there are more vital for our personal life than maths and physic. Because of that assigning more time for them might be appropriate. The truth is that art is necessary, owing to spiritual health and personal life.
Topping the list of art merits is the role of art in our personal life. In the main, all kinds of art such as music and drama represent the depth of feeling of human because that familiarity with the art not only help us to know our emotions but also other ones. In consequence, when one of our friends deals with an emotional issue that all of us face throughout our life many times, we can convince our friends more precisely. As a result, can help them to alleviate their depression problems.
Looking at it from a spiritual point of view, art is a remedy for our pain in comparison to math and physic which are needed for calculating. At first blush, a lack of math and physic knowledge might across as a problem, but passing a few courses about these topics could be enough for daily routine needs. Albeit for specific majors such as engineering, these courses must be expanded. Art courses, in essence, is essential for all major because knowing art and music can perpetuate calmness in our life.
In the final analysis, some courses are a necessity for all aspects of our life such as art and some are in some aspects such as work for example math. Taking more time in art teaches us to perceive human emotion and this ability is a key to alleviating mental pain that people suffer in their life. As a result, art must be a priority in all plans.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'vitals'?
Suggestion: vitals
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t, art must be a priority in all plans.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, so, for example, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1376.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.42443729904 5.12529762239 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37954288383 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.491961414791 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.5753392067 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.7333333333 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7333333333 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150055743728 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0643707094117 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0463597876329 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110947565299 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0467117102096 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.36 12.4159519038 67% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.