To succeed in a business, one needs to know math. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
It is considered that math is necessary to be successful in trading. From my perspective, I believe that math is just a part of many skills for the success in business for some following reasons .
On the one hand, math is a fundamental factor to achieve some huge business goals that appear every time. Each company has to work with numbers everyday, therefore, employees had to be educated proficiently with mathematics in schools and colleges. If the math background is good, enterprises will avoid some errors concerning money like loans, profit and others, it also helps entrepreneurs calculate appropriately in investment. Additionally, math indirectly helps people in practicing thinking and promoting their occupation more easily. Moreover, when analyzing statistics, it will be negotiated about pros and cons, which can orient the development of business and avoid some unworthy limits.
On the other hand, there are many skills except being good at math that workers need to have to be victorious in commerce. For example, if a seller wants to sell houses, math will not be a relevant solution, instead, it will need some soft skills like convincing customers by voice, appearance, attitudes and others. Quality of products and service will become bright spots to attract customers. Besides, referring to experience from successful business men is an excellent way to apply in practical jobs. It also will succeed in trading without hesitation, be patient to goals and learn from making mistakes.
In conclusion, math is still crucial for people who want to achieve success in commerce. However, some other soft skills were also extremely essential to people working in business
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 195, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...s in business for some following reasons . On the one hand, math is a fundament...
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Line 3, column 145, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
.... Each company has to work with numbers everyday, therefore, employees had to be educate...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, however, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, as to, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1430.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31598513011 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88538248743 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.613382899628 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.8244016712 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.142857143 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2142857143 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135905688727 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0491105837847 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0265880574635 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0835690582803 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0212586306401 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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