Success in business can be assured if you have great marketing and promotion. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is often believed that a business is likely to succeed if advertisement and promotion is carried out heavily. I completely agree that a business will be successful if marketing and promotion are done in the right way.
Firstly, marketing a business product helps to gain huge popularity in the business market. Using advertisements such as the internet, televisions or newspapers are likely to spread awareness about business products and services among large groups of people. Consequently, with such rising popularity, more people are increasingly interested in a company service thus booming the sales of an organization. For instance, Jeans products are widely sold around the globe because of its great popularity.
Secondly, continuity in marketing and promotion are proven to attract thousands of customers. In other words, displaying advertisements on a regular basis influences large numbers of people daily. As a result, consumers are willingly interested in a specific product upon seeing the advertisement of it frequently. To illustrate this, the e-commerce site called 'FashionNova' receives 80% of its visitors from Facebook because of using daily facebook targeted advertisements.
In conclusion, I completely agree that a business can achieve success with better marketing and advertisement than others as they aid an organization to gain popularity and attract plenty of customers.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, thus, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1193.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 211.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.65402843602 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.28822529595 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60663507109 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 388.8 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.6422090033 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.454545455 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1818181818 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5454545455 7.06120827912 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153773529943 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0608137495307 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0728809830627 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105229578554 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0581849823935 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.49 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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