As generally considered that some successful sports professionals can pay large amount of money than other professional, whilst other hold the view that is liar. I strongly support second statement because to be success and to gain the popularity that would be say to paid the high proportion of money it is wrong.
One the one hand, it s widely accepted that money is the most convenient factor to afford anything. Although, people should pe earned large proportion of money in the sports profession to acquire the prominent skills and strategies as well as to achieve the goal. Eventhough, they could gain the epertise by the right coach and guidence. We can found the several popular sports's player of the world to these obtain brilliant results by investing large renge of money on their career. In addition, in Nepal lots of cricket's player have being taken extremely extraordinary results on their sports journey by joining the training center and regular coaching.
On the other hand, some disagrees and hold the view that money is not everything to be success on the career as well as in sports professional. Furthermore, that is impossible to achieved the success without hard labour and continue practice. Sports is one desperately different profession where that would be nedeed much practice and keen on continuety to gain the success on sprts' s journey. For example, world one greatest footballer Pele, to reach these stage by the unbelieveable labour and long time struggle even he has not joined any sports academy or training center.
To recapitulate, that have no doubt money can play important role to achieve the success on these sports journey however, without labour and practice that wouldn't be possible to achieve these ambitious goal.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 168, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...earned large proportion of money in the sports profession to acquire the prominent ski...
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Line 3, column 402, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...l popular sportss player of the world to these obtain brilliant results by invest...
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Line 5, column 366, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ctice and keen on continuety to gain the success on sprts s journey. For example,...
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Line 5, column 517, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to even'
Suggestion: to even
...lieveable labour and long time struggle even he has not joined any sports academy or...
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Line 5, column 544, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...ime struggle even he has not joined any sports academy or training center. To recap...
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Line 7, column 137, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e sports journey however, without labour and practice that wouldnt be possible to...
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Line 7, column 157, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wouldn't
...ever, without labour and practice that wouldnt be possible to achieve these ambitious ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, second, so, well, as to, for example, in addition, no doubt, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1478.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09655172414 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71592826665 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544827586207 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.729775236 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.166666667 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1666666667 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20888200344 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0768456945103 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0795852449229 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136353596969 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0458030464452 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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