Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other professions. some people think this is fully justified while other think it is unfair.
discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In our societies, professionals in any fields are important, but sometimes sports professionals would be more supported financially than professionals in other fields. However, there are arguments as we will discuss in here:
Some people think this difference between professionals is not fairly. they believe that government can pay attention more to academic professions and encourage young people to achieve high education. for example, they think that an educated engineer can be very useful than a professional in football or the society is more needed to a medical doctor than a tennis player. if professions in sports fields earn more money easily, they would be an encourage for children who seek money to quit education and universities resulting in a poor educated society.
In the opposite, there is people who think this difference is justified. although, these people know that it is necessary for a society to have profession in all fields, but they think sports professionals can act as a role model for young people and encourage them to exercise in a particular sport and increasing more happiness and freshment in the society. they believe that a society needs more exercise and happiness to success and this encourage can make sports professionals role models and lead the society to have healthier people with more physical exercise.
In overall, it seems that both sides have reasonable explains. personally, I think it would be better if government try to support all professions equally and encourage young people to achieve what they think they are talented for it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, for example, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1336.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23921568627 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95162588211 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498039215686 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.2073950588 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.6 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309202798968 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137087924993 0.084324248473 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0520649299496 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185482528076 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0566743198003 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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