Today, many people are living luxurious life and the lifestyle is (has) also changed as compare(d) to the past. One
rising problem faced by individuals in many countries is regarding their increasing weight and less
attention toward physical activities. This essay intends to outline the consequences of lifestyle changes
followed by a few suggetions to cope up with situations.
Firstly,increasing weight and fats in people are mainly caused by the improper diet and eating habits of
junk food.Many people consume food which contain high amount of carbs and they do not follow their
diet plan strictly. To deal with this situation, doctors and local authorities should spread awareness about
importance of healthy diet.They should promote the foods with high nutrition values.They can start a
campaign to divert the public towards a healthy lifestyle.
Another point to consider is that the second reason for increasing obesity and ignorance of proper
fitness might be the lifestyle of people.Most of the people are living in the urban areas and they have
sedentary jobs or jobs which include regular travel so they cannot dedicate time for fitness and if some
of them manage to do that , they cannot follow that schedule for a long time.To tackle this situation, the
government and all the institutions have to be united and impose strict rules and guidelines so every one
can focus on their fitness.
In conclusion, lack of awareness about healthy diet and unable to spare time for exercise is causing
major health issues and it can be solved by the combined efforts of government, organisations and
individuals.
- Today s society provides people with various ways to lose weight such as special diets or exercise regimes Many people believe though that poor food and today s lifestyle should be addressed first What is your opinion 73
- taken from Cambridge 8 test 4 writing section task 2 In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to 73
- Nowadays many people choose to be self employed rather than to work for a company or organization Why might this be the case What could be the disadvantages of being self employed 61
- Some people believe that technological developments have decreased crime Others believe that crime has increased because of technology Discuss both the views and give your opinion 89
- Today s society provides people with various ways to lose weight such as special diets or exercise regimes Many people believe though that poor food and today s lifestyle should be addressed first What is your opinion 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, regarding, second, so, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1386.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29007633588 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78872390485 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610687022901 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 20.2975951904 182% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 140.794103541 49.4020404114 285% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 198.0 106.682146367 186% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.4285714286 20.7667163134 180% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.85714285714 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 17.0 4.38176352705 388% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13052306822 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0585858313533 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0478338692136 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0412392398592 0.151304729494 27% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.04289950742 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.2 13.0946893788 170% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.92 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 11.3001002004 157% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.17 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.1190380762 166% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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