Task 2: The best way to ensure the growth of children is to make parents take parenting courses. Do you agree or disagree?
Opinions are always divided as to what measures parents should adopt and implement to guarantee the development of their children. Many individuals hold a firm belief that it is of great importance to require parents to attend parenting courses, and this should be viewed as the best solution. Personally, while I acknowledge several benefits of such courses, I also contend that there might be alternatives which demand equal consideration.
On the one hand, those who advocate the idea of each parent taking up parenting training sessions have demonstrated their compelling reasons. They believe that parents, especially couples with newborns, are likely to be equipped with profound fundamentals concerning childcare and health issues by means of parenting courses. this might share a causal relationship with a child’s comprehensive development owing to the fact that parents can thoroughly understand how to cater their child’s demands and address health-related issues such as coughing, respiratory system issues and eye conditions at home if medical assistance from doctors is temporarily unavailable. Another merit of parenting courses is deemed to link to the supervision of experienced experts and specialists. Thanks to valuable lessons and shared knowledge from leading figures in the field of medicine and education, parents, regardless of age and background, are believed to accumulate hand-on experience, thus laying a solid foundation for their child-upbringing journey in the long run.
On the other hand, other domestic and social factors should also play a pivotal role in ensuring the growth of children. From a domestic perspective, it is recommended that novice parents consult their grandparents, who underwent the entire child-rearing process before, and therefore can envision what is the best for a child’s overall development. From a social perspective, the parent-school bond needs tightening via parent-teacher conference and daily attendance check. An explanation for this measure might stem from the fact that parents might support their child financially and mentally, whereas school - a miniature society – is where a child acquires interpersonal skills through social contacts and develop their physicality with the aid of extracurricular activities. Accordingly, grandparents and school are an indispensable part of nurturing a child besides the role of parents.
In conclusion, although I highly value the significance of parenting courses in terms of in-depth childcare principles and the presence of professionals, I also highlight other equally important options namely the consultation of grandparents and better parent-school relationship to enable children to grow both mentally and physically.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, besides, if, so, therefore, thus, whereas, while, as to, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2379.0 1615.20841683 147% => OK
No of words: 404.0 315.596192385 128% => OK
Chars per words: 5.88861386139 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48327461151 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.33724872926 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 176.041082164 138% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601485148515 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 710.1 506.74238477 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 84.7473134846 49.4020404114 172% => OK
Chars per sentence: 169.928571429 106.682146367 159% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.8571428571 20.7667163134 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.35714285714 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221970226923 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.084530815352 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0560928944093 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142246070912 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0288898535313 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.7 13.0946893788 158% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.14 50.2224549098 52% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.47 12.4159519038 141% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.58 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 142.0 78.4519038076 181% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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