In the recent decade, interaction within people has changed considerably due to technological advancement. However, the personal touch in the relationship of the public has reduced. In this essay, we are going to discuss how technology affected on relationship and we will take a glance on the positive and negative aspect on the same.
Speed of connectivity of people has got increased significantly with the use of social media websites like Facebook, WhatsApp, Instagram and many more. One can connect with anyone whenever he or she wants to connect by means of Skype or video call. So one can be in touch at any point of time. Which create happiness in the relationship even though it is virtual. So one can keep his or her loved one updated with his status. It can turn to habit to get in touch with them. Mostly this type of relationship is observed in teenagers where all are making fun out of group chatting. So this kind of positive development is seen from technology.
Having said that, there is no personal touch in communication. If someone does not interact personally with anyone then he or she can feel isolated. For instance, in previous days, a letter was having a lot of value which is then replaced by mobiles. The happiness from that communication is not comparable to mobiles.
Considering the above mentioned points, it is more positive enhancement in technology as it saves a lot of time and also it keeps in touch anytime with anyone. So one can use that saved time it effectively.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, then, for instance, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1255.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80842911877 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90149388835 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586206896552 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 413.1 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.4596757868 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.8235294118 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3529411765 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.94117647059 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179616069424 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0521503072468 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0476639296589 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102416751275 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0594859899853 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.0946893788 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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