Innovation's gradually increased in the telecommunication sector, likely, from the internet facility in varied data - packages to the resonable cost upto local or international calls. In such a way, technology impacted the way of interaction between people and that's changing from time to time. I think it's a negative development and I will explain it in the following paragraphs.
Firstly, the availability of internet facility and well-structured apps make it possible for people to come into contact with each other very easily. For example, various social sites like facebook, instagram, twitter, whatsapp and many more. With the help of them , people can share their views and opinions with everyone, who can be accessible at distant places. Another point is that, the face to face relationship turn out to be virtual one and people used to talk online at a higher rate, rather, than going personally to visit.
Secondly, the large number of internet users
addicted to usage of social sites and they share their personal information and posting unwanted images on such sites, that, gives them self-satisfaction and they feel confident, while, it impacted badly. Other people used to leave comments and gives like or dislikes, that, work as a fuel for them,but,it takes the peace of mind and it enlarge the social gap, because, people demand a box of appreciation from others, however, in reality, they even don't take care about each other and they are so selfish, that, can't helpful in increasing healthy social base.
In conclusion, it seems to me that technology badly impacted the relationships in the society and in some ways, it leave the people alone with their postings or comments with no real love and strong bond, while, it also provide opportunity to people by eliminating the geographical boundaries.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1531.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18983050847 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90741081925 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623728813559 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 86.8285667278 49.4020404114 176% => OK
Chars per sentence: 153.1 106.682146367 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.5 20.7667163134 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233711367034 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0864890673639 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0742033579521 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107395414622 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0590890452253 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 13.0946893788 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.68 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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