Task 2:Some people think that newly built houses should follow the style of old houses in local areas. Others think that people should have the freedom to build houses of their own style. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Some people argue that new houses should be designed to follow the style of old houses in local areas as opposed to having the freedom to build houses of their own style. In my opinion, I believe that build houses like any others in local areas will bring more benefit to people who live there.
On the one hand, the houses that have a different design from the others in the same residential area will make the whole area more cheerful and artistic. The houses that are built by their owners not only bring to the residential area a new appearance but also show the personality of the owner. For example, the owners can paint the wall of their building whatever they like such as colours, wallpaper or their art, not only that they can show to their neighbour them character and easy to make friends with people who live there and make their houses become the most unique and beautiful house.
On the other hand, design houses the same as the community in that area can protect the owner from thieves and dangerous. When houses look similar, it will enhance a sense of the community, there will be no distinction between rich and poor when they live in the same kind of house when looking in the outside. Moreover, people who live here do not have to worry about the crime, because the thieves can not distinguish which house is rich to rob so the residents can live in safe and do not have to think about the crime will come to them.
In conclusion, although many people want to design a house by themselves to show their personality, I strongly believe that building a house like the others in the residential area will bring more benefit to the owners.
- Task 2 Some people think the government funding should not be used for supporting art and culture while others think supporting cultural activities may be beneficial for the population and the culture Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 61
- Task 2 Many people say that universities should only offer to young students with the highest marks others say they should accept people of all ages even if they did not do well Discuss both views and give your opinions 56
- The graph shows the income of four cafes in New York in last year 67
- Task 2 Maintaining public libraries is a waste of money since computer technology can replace their functions Do you agree or disagree 56
- Some people think that newly built houses should follow the style of old houses in local areas Others think that people should have the freedom to build houses of their own style Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 67
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, moreover, so, for example, in conclusion, kind of, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1359.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.51495016611 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23624813709 2.80592935109 80% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.468438538206 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.1310447821 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.0 106.682146367 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.4444444444 20.7667163134 161% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.5555555556 7.06120827912 178% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.389255954116 0.244688304435 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.187198225906 0.084324248473 222% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.149724650823 0.0667982634062 224% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.273506548873 0.151304729494 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.160170912545 0.056905535591 281% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.9 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.47 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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