Team activities can teach more skills for life than other activities which are played alone. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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...my opinion. There are many advantages of team activities perhaps the main ben...
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...he main benefit is that people can learn a lot of skills which are good for their...
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...hich are good for their life For example,they can learn cooperation skills ,team mana...
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...ng ,and so on these skills are normally use in personal life of any individual.Furt...
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...sonal life of any individual.Furthermore,when people do work with in group then they...
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...dividual.Furthermore,when people do work with in group then they can improve thei...
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...ove their communication skills as well. Moreover , decision making skills also b...
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...ication skills as well. Moreover , decision making skills also be can lear...
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...use in solo activities we can not learn these kind of skills .what is more , people can ex...
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...es we can not learn these kind of skills .what is more , people can expand their k...
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...learn these kind of skills .what is more , people can expand their know if they do...
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... point on different topic so as a result ,we can say that team activities are more...
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...neficial than solo activities Eventually,people can make freinds in team activities bec...
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...e work in team activities. However,solo activities are also important because i...
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... activities people can learn competition ,which is very crucial in today fast pace...
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...s very crucial in today fast paced world . Finally,in solo activities people becom...
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...cial in today fast paced world . Finally,in solo activities people become more inde...
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...use people can improve their imagination . To recapitulate,it can be said th...
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...heir imagination . To recapitulate,it can be said that,team activities as wel...
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... activities have own advantages as well a disadvantages although, I believe that team activitie...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, then, well, for example, kind of, as a result, as well as, what is more

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1361.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46586345382 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.36296514949 2.80592935109 120% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518072289157 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 41.0 20.2975951904 202% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 129.953089827 49.4020404114 263% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 226.833333333 106.682146367 213% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 41.5 20.7667163134 200% => OK
Discourse Markers: 21.0 7.06120827912 297% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 30.0 5.01903807615 598% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.438632079213 0.244688304435 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.23664295223 0.084324248473 281% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0644860660836 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.260016351973 0.151304729494 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0487267839537 0.056905535591 86% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.1 13.0946893788 192% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 21.4 50.2224549098 43% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.5 11.3001002004 181% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.33 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 20.5 9.78957915832 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 18.4 10.1190380762 182% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 10.7795591182 195% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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