Technogical development in the earlier times brought more changes to the life of ordinary than recent technological development have brought.
Do you agree or disagree.
Generally speaking , technology plays very crucial role in human life . There are various development has been from past . Technology is much faster as compare to past time . It changes the people life . Now a day's , life get easier and faster . Moreover , machinery has developed and they get habbitual of technology and they get lazy by this . I partially agree with this statement and I will discuss my own view regarding to this topic in approaching paragraphs.
To embark on , technology has vast impact on our parents generation. More of transport system has change and also hospital facilities develop in earlier times . In past time , humans are illiterate they do not get proper education but now education department have modified and all people are literate nowadays. In past time, they use the hand made mechanic item and do every thing manually from household chores to transportation, agriculture, food processing , preserve and communication , entertainment at 100 years ago . By the industrial revolution the technology have been introduced to the people by various changes of machinery to make people actually easy and faster to fullfill the need of growing population. But it also effect the human life they get lazy and they are the habitual of using the modern technology.
On the other hand , the recent technology which we are using in modern era these all are modified because these machinery has developed in earlier times .For instance , in past time , they are use radio for the medium of entertainment and for communication television and telephone special equipment for agriculture, auto mobiles vehicle for transportation but 100 years ago they use bull chart for irrigation the use machanenry motors . The report conducted by American technological department that technology has developed more in earlier time as compared to recent era . Engineering department they are doing develope in old machinery and launched by giving them New name. By this life get easier and faster.
To sum up , according to me , the development in technology has astonished the humans in the earlier period . Whatever , we are getting now these all equipment are upgrade of old gadgets.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, moreover, regarding, so, for instance, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
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Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.3376753507 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1831.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 350.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23142857143 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98393445835 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.508571428571 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 599.4 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
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Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 91.1132746029 49.4020404114 184% => OK
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Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
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Sentence topic coherence: 0.0939943614723 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.072291717323 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163013618384 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.033993086591 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
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linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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