Technological developments in earlier time brought more changes to the life of ordinary people then recent technological developments have brought do you agree or disagree with this statements.
Technological developments are on going process which is started when human was born and still continue. Some people believe that earlier growth made more changes in the life of comman man. However i totally disagree with the above statements, i will give my argue in next paragraphs.
Firstly, In this morden era industrial revolution begin and it is came with new innovation to make people's life easy. For instance, the difference between writer and computer, in ancient time writer had to write every thing by their hand fir for there is no excuse of making mistake on papers. If they make error or maybe any page lost they had to write from beginning. But now we have computer so many problems solved. Not only write easily without mistakes but also there are several applications which are given by computer such as games, calculations and music.
Moreover current technology can reduce busy work, so can be more productive. Apart from this new technology is more comfortable, cheaper and time saving. Before internet arrival we have to send our message through postman even though he do not guarantee to reach this message on time and right person. Hence, now we are using WhatsApp or messenger so it has solved our all problems.
In summary, i opine that the development in technology in recent time create massive impact on human's life.
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- Technological developments in earlier time brought more changes to the life of ordinary people then recent technological developments have brought do you agree or disagree with this statements. 56
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...in recent time create massive impact on humans life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, still, apart from, for instance, in summary, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1123.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 228.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92543859649 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57436339237 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.701754385965 0.561755894193 125% => OK
syllable_count: 367.2 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.2146029241 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.3846153846 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5384615385 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07692307692 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283680047709 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0872414545424 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0749379755929 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176786025325 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0762295993225 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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