As technology develops, online business meetings and business training increasingly rise. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages
Thanks to the significant development of technology, the use of web conferencing systems to host online meetings or training has increasingly expanded. Although this modern alteration may contribute many positive aspects,my firm conviction is that the setbacks outweigh the merits.
On the other hand, I understand why many people of the fervent conviction argue that such a widespread use of online sytems provides workers with several advantages. To begin with, organisations may find it more straightforward to keep contact with their workers in different locations. For instance, a company can successfully hold an online meeting while their employees stay at home. Hence, the more the adaption of online conferencing systems, the more the opportunities to keep on the business’ s progress without worrying about employees’ destinations. Moreover, if the use of online network in business is widely provided, the costs related to transportation, accommodation or meals will be saved on a large scale. Thus, the money saved could be allocated on different purposes such as marketing, design or machines, enhancing the quality of the whole organization.
Despite these benefits described above, I believe there are many drawbacks which negatively affect each individual’ s performance in workplace. One of the most obvious disadvantages is the misunderstanding or disrupted communication . Additionally, once the poor network emerges, it is really complicated to understand the message the host wants to impart, leading to misapprehension of the original message. Hence, such a deficiency of a company’s progress may come as an expense. Secondly, the limitation of budget is what the problem of online conferencing systems is all about. Since the expenditure of online requirements for business training has increased significantly, many small organisations do not possess enough money to operate such a modern online training for their workers. Consequensely, this alarming issue is likely to create the imbalance between wealthy companies and poor business.
Taking everything into consideration, although many merits which emerge via online conferencing systems are impressive in terms of convenience, I still consider that not only the unexpectingly poor network but also the exorbitant problems negatively affect the private business.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, may, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, still, thus, while, for instance, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2008.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 348.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.77011494253 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.39711369281 2.80592935109 121% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603448275862 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 637.2 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.9534217394 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.5 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.875 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210414533841 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0578603260059 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0733539050093 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116296569966 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0566119807368 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.19 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.85 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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