In recent times, media has been in the limelight and has aroused the broad concern for the pernicious effects associated with it. Some people are of the fervent conviction that is focusing on negative and urgent issues is detrimental to society. From my perspective, I partially agree with this view.
There are several reasons why media coverage related to problems and urgent issues is proven to bring enormous benefits for both the social and citizens. Firstly, it is the responsibility of the mass media to cover negative issues such as the natural disaster, which allows people to protect them from potential financial loss and physical injury. To take a concrete example, new reports from the television programs covering the information about tsunami and earthquake of the central of Vietnam set the pivotal platform for warning the government and inhabitants. Secondly, the environmental pollution topics from the mass media are of great necessity for protecting the environment. Indeed, it not only raises the public’s awareness of safeguarding habitat but also catch the government’s attention to this phenomenon.
However, the excessive reports on problems negatively influence the behaviour of people, as well as the journalist’s conduct. It is evident that when people are exposed to too much news about crimes or accidents, they will lose a sense of security. As a result, they become over-cautious and suspicious of the others, which lead to having difficulties in building an interpersonal relationship. Moreover, it encourages journalists to create bad stories and deliver exaggerated news. Indeed, some people believe that the dramatic and exciting news is easy to draw the public’s attention, they tend to write their articles with the emphasis of negative parts of the stories so that their newspapers will sell well. Therefore, it will result in fake news and fictional stories.
In conclusion, although the awful news create the feeling of anxiety and uncomfortable to a large number of audiences, they are unavoidable in current information. The government and citizens can learn to solve the problems.
- The tendency of news reports in the media to focus more on problems and emergencies than on positive developments is harm to the individuals and the society as a whole To what extent do you agree or disagree 92
- Some people think that the government should fund music dance and arts lessons for children Others think that they should be funded by private businesses or children s families Discuss both views and give your own opinion 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 91, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...feeling of anxiety and uncomfortable to a large number of audiences, they are unavoidable in curr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1809.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41616766467 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02519835587 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595808383234 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 561.6 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.8013517906 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.0625 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.875 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0954601643711 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0297864872886 0.084324248473 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0188612600093 0.0667982634062 28% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0510870468274 0.151304729494 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.015641277451 0.056905535591 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.88 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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